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问好血玫瑰!句子格律正确,但是基本与图无关。忍却相思泪欲抛,忍却-欲抛矛盾。望断天涯梦似牢,后三再酌。
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问好紫菀!作业完成很棒!格律正确,句子也符合题图。唯独:故人离去梦难寻【十二侵】,不合图意。后三再酌。
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