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问好诗友,小诗如一幅青绿山水手卷徐徐展开,以"水-柳-风-春"的意象呈现出来,给人一幅美好的春景画面。
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诗友好,小诗思启事承,转句宕开一笔“风翻案",以"未成诗"作结,贵在留白,笔法老到,高手一枚,向您学习!
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