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问好老师!爱花君子把月季描写至极顶,有魅力。
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问候学友:对句结构不对,后三前四都不对
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问好学友,对句前四后三关联不紧凑,改后三,或者巧趣。
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问好学友,联作勾勒出一幅优美且生动的濠河风光图,不错,学友功底深厚,对你应该要求严些,应该在挖掘一下濠河所蕴含的历史文化内涵,zhe y...
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