汉译《伤逝》

紫云生

汉译《伤逝》
原作/William Wordsworth
译作/云生
【题记】华兹华斯是19世纪英国浪漫主义的巅峰诗人，这首十四行诗是为悼念夭亡的幼女凯瑟琳·华兹华斯而作。原诗尾韵为 abba /acca /dede /de，每行10个音节，五步音步抑扬格。译诗采用九字齐言体，韵式与原诗完全相同。

欣悦乍来我急切如风，
与谁分享这激荡心潮，
你深埋坣墓孤寂难消，
沧桑无改却幽怨无穷。

脑际萦回你真爱深衷，
天塌地裂亦难以忘记，
那怕一时片刻暂分离，
意乱魂飞如双目闭蒙。

痛失至爱我黯然伤神，
悲情绝望受最深折磨，
孑然伫立盼救你一人，
可怜宝贝已托体山阿。

无论今生来世探年庚，
天颜萎谢难见笑梨渦。

原作：

DESIDERIA
By William Wordsworth

Surprised by joy -- impatient as the Wind
I turn’ d to share the transport -- O with whom
But Thee, deep buried in the silent tomb,
That spot which no vicissitude can find?

Love, faithful love, recall'd thee to my mind--
But how could I forget thee? Through what power,
Even for the least division of an hour,
Have I been so beguiled as to be blind.

To my most grievous loss? -- That thought's return
Was the worst pang that sorrow ever bore,
Save one, one only, when I stood forlorn,
Knowing my heart's best treasure was no more.

That neither present time, nor years unborn,
Could to my sight that heavenly face restore.

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