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裹处应平。都伴与/蹄奋丰年,应对:皆为其/口餐饱腹,(前面是领字)
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张果老不是中药名,改为罗汉果。
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平(形)稍欠。
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可知乎/瑞石雄姿,
当晓者/秀水盛景,(水字处应平)
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在回味/垂柳钓风,
且品尝/眠风宿柳,(上联有柳,下一般避免重复,但如需重用,在相应处亦重用)
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介杰乃春秋三杰,介子推为一杰,后有寒食节。(三杰还有:伍子胥,管仲)
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