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隐,隐藏,隐藏名姓,并不存在词类活用,以此为依据,注意修正对句
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额,第二题中并未出现“名”和“字”两字,模仿痕迹严重
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饿,本义为动词
朋,建议不使用朋,在对句中显得太过生硬
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饿本意动词,对句基本可以,可再加琢磨,精益求精
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