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【春花朵朵开】念奴娇·春花启 |
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点评
问句起拍,振聋发聩。“明月几时有,把酒问青天。”
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急切盼春,但春总是姗姗来迟。
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仍然是冬景一片。
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行文陡转,正在苦于盼春而春不至之时,春天突然出现。行文波澜起伏。
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如琼梅花绽放全城,满城飘香。
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