1143| 35
|
18期3月份练笔交流活动 |
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
点评
写出了女性特色!
| ||
| ||
点评
对仗工整,紧扣诗题,拟人修辞方法娴熟,值得我欣赏,学习。
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
点评
对仗句还须锤炼。
| ||
| ||
| ||
|小黑屋|手机版|嘤鸣诗社
( 湘ICP备17006309号-1 )
GMT+8, 2025-5-3 06:33
Powered by Discuz! X3.4
Copyright © 2001-2021, Tencent Cloud.