《贫女苏珊之梦影》（译诗）

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试译The Reverie of Poor Susan

【题记】威廉•华兹华斯（William Wordsworth，1770-1850），英国浪漫主义诗人。The Reverie of Poor Susan一诗，借助贫女苏珊的幻觉，表现了在英国工业革命时代，诗人对故乡田园生活的向往和眷恋。全诗共十六行，每四行一个诗节，每两行押一个韵，韵脚为：aa bb cc dd ee ff gg hh。译文保留了原作的韵式。

《贫女苏珊之梦影》（译诗）

原作/William Wordsworth

翻译/云生

林间街角初现晨曦，

画眉欢唱三年有期。

贫苦苏珊行经此处，

清晨寥寂唯闻鸟呼。

曲调迷人伊何伤痛？

幻见高山树木葱茏。

罗斯柏路朗雾飘浮，

齐普谷底河水川流。

青翠牧场横亘谷间，

她常提桶快步下山。

孤单小筑宛若鸽房，

世上唯一她最神往。

凝眸心与天堂梦醒，

河川雾锁树影潜形。

小溪断流高山不耸，

缤纷景象霎时虚空。

2020年3月31日

挂玉英文原诗：

The Reverie of Poor Susan

By William Wordsworth

At the corner of Wood Street, when day light appears,

Hangs a Thrush that sings loud, it has sung for threeyears:

Poor Susan has passed by the spot, and has heard

In the silence of morning the song of the Bird.

'Tis a note of enchantment; what ails her?She sees

A mountain ascending, a vision of trees;

Bright volumes of vapour through Lothbury glide,

And a river flows on through the vale of Cheapside.

Green pastures she views in the midst of the dale,

Down which she so often has tripped with her pail;

And a single small cottage, a nest like a dove's,

The one only dwelling on earth that she loves.

She looks, and her heart is in heaven: but they fade,

The mist and the river, the hill and the shade:

The stream will not flow, and the hill will not rise,

And the colours have all passed away from her eyes!

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