【七绝 】雪夜驻林间(译诗)

紫云生

试译 Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening

【题记】罗伯特·弗罗斯特是20世纪美国最受欢迎的诗人之一，《雪夜驻林间》是其著名诗篇。诗人在一个寒冷漆黑的雪夜驻马林边，凝视飞雪，虽然自然可恋，他最终还是被识途的小马唤回现实，践行人世的承诺，继续原定旅程。全诗共四节，每节四行，四音步抑扬格，押韵格式是aaba bbcb ccdc dded。每节第三句尾字又引出下一节的韵脚，回环不已。本人试以七绝形式对译每个小节，四联七绝构成全诗。韵式也是aaba bbcb ccdc dded，与原诗相合。

【七绝 】雪夜驻林间(译诗)

原著/罗伯特·弗罗斯特

翻译/云生

能猜谁主此林园，盖我知翁住里村。

不见停驹冰冷地，凝观白雪欲销魂。

吾驹想必起狐疑，四野无人舍远离。

林密湖封冰雪境，一年最暗正当时。

摆颈询求响轡铃，何生纰漏不该停。

吞声不应聆天籁，习习微风雪羽翎。

幽深黝黑景清佳，履约须行诺在怀。

此去高眠犹有路，兼程数里梦徐来。

2019年10月13日

附英文原诗：

Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening

By Robert Frost

Whose woods these are I think I know.

His house is in the village though;

He will not see me stopping here

To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer

To stop without a farmhouse near

Between the woods and frozen lake

The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake

To ask if there is some mistake.

The only other sound's the sweep

Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark, and deep.

But I have promises to keep,

And miles to go before I sleep,

And miles to go before I sleep.

仲平

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阳天

信，雅、达，翻译的几个要求基本达到了

寂舟

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