满江红 * 公祭日有感

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[i=s] 本帖最后由 舍予云尔 于 2014-12-28 23:29 编辑 [/i]<br /><br /><STRONG><FONT face=黑体><FONT size=7><SPAN style="COLOR: red">满江红 *</SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: red"></SPAN></FONT></FONT><SPAN style="COLOR: maroon"><FONT face="宋体 "><FONT size=5>公祭日有感</FONT></FONT></STRONG> <BR><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: blue">&nbsp;&nbsp;</SPAN></FONT></FONT></B> <BR><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: fuchsia">序</SPAN></FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: fuchsia">：<I>2014</I><I>年12月13日是首个南京大屠杀死难者国家公祭日，当有作纪念。因以补之。</I></SPAN></FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: fuchsia"></SPAN></FONT></FONT></B> <BR><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: blue">&nbsp;&nbsp; </SPAN></FONT></FONT></B><BR><SPAN style="COLOR: #0000ff"><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">七七年前，正值我，潜龙蛰</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">穴</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">。</FONT></FONT></B> <BR><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">日寇至，横行东亚，南京凄</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">绝</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">。</FONT></FONT></B> <BR><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">卅万英魂刀下死，</FONT></FONT></B> <BR><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">数千厉鬼城头</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">越</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">。</FONT></FONT></B> <BR><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">只记得，国恨更家仇，</FONT></FONT></B> <BR><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">亲人</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">血</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">。</FONT></FONT></B> <BR><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</FONT></FONT></B> <BR><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">龙腾起，开新</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">页</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">。</FONT></FONT></B> <BR><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">神州崛，谁能</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">遏</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">？</FONT></FONT></B> <BR><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">华夏复兴日，岂能重</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">跌</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">？</FONT></FONT></B> <BR><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">国耻当年宜记取，</FONT></FONT></B> <BR><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">倭狂尔下须关</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">切</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">。</FONT></FONT></B> <BR><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">铭青史，公祭慰先人，</FONT></FONT></B> <BR><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">长无</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">竭</FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">！</FONT></FONT></B> <BR><BR></SPAN>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <BR>
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<DIV align=left><B><FONT size=4><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: fuchsia">谱式柳永体</SPAN></FONT></FONT></B><B><FONT size=4><FONT face="宋体 ">　</FONT></FONT></B><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">双调九十三字，前段八句四仄韵，后段十句五仄韵</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">　</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 "></FONT></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=left><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">◎</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma ">●</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="arial ">○○</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">⊙⊙</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma ">●</FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">⊙○◎</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">●</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">⊙◎◎</FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">◎○⊙</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma ">●</FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">◎○○</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">●</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">◎</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma ">●</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">⊙○○</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma ">●●</FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">◎○⊙</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma ">●</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="arial ">○○</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">●</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma ">●</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">⊙◎</FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">⊙</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma ">●●</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="arial ">○○</FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="arial ">○○</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">●</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma "></FONT></FONT></DIV>
<DIV align=left><FONT size=3><FONT face="arial ">○</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">⊙</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma ">●</FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="arial ">○</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">◎</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">●</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="arial ">○</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">◎</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma ">●</FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="arial ">○○</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">●</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">◎⊙⊙⊙◎</FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">◎⊙</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="arial ">○</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">●</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">⊙</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma ">●</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">⊙○○</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma ">●●</FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">⊙○◎</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma ">●</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="arial ">○○</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">●</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">⊙◎⊙</FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="宋体 ">◎</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma ">●●</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="arial ">○○</FONT></FONT><FONT size=1><FONT face="宋体 "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">　</SPAN></FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="arial ">○○</FONT></FONT><FONT size=3><FONT face="tahoma "><SPAN style="COLOR: red">●</SPAN></FONT></FONT><B><FONT size=6><FONT face="tahoma "><SPAN style="COLOR: red"></SPAN></FONT></FONT></B></DIV>
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<DIV align=left><B><FONT size=5><FONT face="宋体 ">2014-12-28</FONT></FONT></B></DIV>
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周炜才

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周炜才

柳永体，个别处如“南京凄绝”，可是“仄平中仄”格式否？

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<BLOCKQUOTE><FONT size=2><A href="http://www1.hkscxh.com/forum.php?mod=redirect&amp;goto=findpost&amp;pid=988639&amp;ptid=101613" target=_blank><FONT color=#999999>周炜才 发表于 2014-12-28 15:58</FONT></A></FONT><BR>柳永体，个别处如“南京凄绝”，可是“仄平中仄”格式否？</BLOCKQUOTE></DIV>
<P><BR><BR>“钦定词谱”满江红柳永体此句是“◎○○●”即“中平平仄”。</P>
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舍予云尔

周炜才 发表于 2014-12-28 15:58
柳永体，个别处如“南京凄绝”，可是“仄平中仄”格式否？

我写词，谱式都是采自钦定词谱。

淡云绕翠微

赏读云兄正能量佳作，学习了，问好

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舍予云尔 发表于 2014-12-28 19:46
我写词，谱式都是采自钦定词谱。

云兄写作，作风严谨。值得大家学习！问好云兄

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淡云绕翠微 发表于 2014-12-28 23:36
云兄写作，作风严谨。值得大家学习！问好云兄

谢谢淡云肯定！问好首版！

东来紫气H

欣赏兄台好词，问好！

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舍予云尔 发表于 2014-12-29 14:14
谢谢淡云肯定！问好首版！

云兄客气了,向云兄学习.问好云兄.

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东来紫气H 发表于 2014-12-29 14:26
欣赏兄台好词，问好！

谢谢东来紫气！